one problem about writing

Justina8023

fanzhi8866: Thank you for your advice.but how  you describe that the reader can vicariously feel the quietness.

I'm not sure.v What about a contrast? I say you can describe the sound of fallen leaves, to indicate anything else is vioceless.

fanzhi8866

Justina8023: I'm not sure.v What about a contrast? I say you can describe the sound of fallen leaves, to indicate anything else is vioceless.

Thank you .I think your advice is advisable

Justina8023

fanzhi8866: Thank you .I think your advice is advisable

You are welcome~