商务英语句子修改练习
商务英语证书BEC考试近年来被各类涉外企业、部门用来作为招收职员时英语能力的证明;同时也是商务工作人员或英语学习者检验、提高英语水平的方式。由于很多即将进入职场的学生或已工作的青年把该证书作为就业、求职的重要砝码，因此BEC考试也被称为“商务求职通行证。
例子：
The following sentences are taken from memosthat are not clear or concise.Rewrite them tomake them better.
1.We have come to the decision that it is notpossible for this offer to be accepted by ourcompany.
2.In view of the fact that we will lose a big contractnext year, expenses will have to be cut by ourcompany.
3.In the event of a retailer finding our shirtsunsatisfactory, we should make arrangements for them to be collected and replacements sentwithout delay.
4.In spite of the fact that we are losing orders to our competitors, we have no intention oflowering our prices.
5.The reason why our sales are going down is because of the lack of staff in the promotiondepartment.
参考答案
1. We have decided that we cannot accept this offer.
2. Since we will lose a big contract next year, we must cut expenses
3. If a retailer finds our shirts unsatisfactory, we should collect and replace them withoutdelay.
4. Although we are losing orders to our competitors, we will not lower our prices.
5. Our sales are falling because our promotion branch is under-staffed.
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