2017年12月英语四级高分范文(十二)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese):
1)大学生应对挫折的能力差,学校应当加强挫折教育2)开展挫折教育刻不容缓
【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述一种观点,提纲第2点要求进一步论证这个观点,由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:根据目前大学生应对挫折能力差的现象提出观点:学校应当加强挫折教育;举例论证开展挫折教育的重要性;重申观点,总结全文。
【参考范文】Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students
College students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life, which has been generally accepted. Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities. The truth of it is deep and profound。
Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument. A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration. This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay. For another example, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations. Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons。
Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students. But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education. To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life。
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