2017年12月英语四级高分范文(四)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)据调查显示,现在大学生每月的花销越来越高,很多大学生花钱如流水,根本没有节俭的概念2)分析产生这一现象的原因3)我的看法
【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出校园内的一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生花钱没有节制的现象;分析导致大学生这种消费习惯的原因;阐述“我”对大学生消费观的看法。
【参考范文】Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors。
First of all, nowadays most of students are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending。
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development。
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