高考英语优秀作文赏析：2008年重庆卷2
Dear Amy,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School in China. I have got to know that you got lung cancer and are in great pain. Sorry to hear that. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. For every letter, they give three cents. So I will try as hard as possible to persuade my friends to write to you so as to help you get enough money to cure the disease. Im sure you will be OK soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
名师点评：
文章整体来说一气呵成，衔接自然。通过诸如原因状语从句的使用，使得文章内容饱满，过渡自然，较好地使用了诸如but，so之类的连词。文章使用了“the +比较级，the +比较级”的句式，十分出彩。
积累卡片：好词：1. cure v.治愈2. association n.协会3.donate v.捐赠
好句：1. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. 但是因为你还比较年轻，疾病不会很严重，你能够战胜它。 好处：since，引导原因状语从句。
2. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. 据说你收到的信越多，美国抗癌组织捐给你的钱就越多。好处：the +比较级，表示强调。
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