高考英语优秀作文赏析：2008年江苏卷2
满分作文2：
Good afternoon, everyone,
Its my honor to be here to give you a speech. On April 29，2007 the national student sports program was held from 10∶00am~11∶00am in many primary and middle schools all over China. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program. In Jiangsu, about 11 milloin students took part in the activity.
The theme of this program is “do exercises for one hour per day, work for 50 years healthily and lead a happy life”. In my viewpoint, this is quite good for us senior students. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. That will be very good. So boys and girls，come and join us now!
Thank you!
名师点评：
文章的结构很清楚，内容和要点把握得也比较完整。本文十分符合演讲稿的要求，写得比较出色。第一段中用了强调句，指出了发起项目的主体。作者用并列的方式解释了主题，十分出色。定语从句也用的很好、很到位。
积累卡片：
好词：1. promote v.促进2. foundation n.基础3. gain v.获得
好句：1. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program.是教育部推动了这个计划。
好处：强调句的使用十分准确。
2. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. 每天锻炼一小时我们的身体就会很健康，而这也为将来打下了坚实的基础。
好处：lay a solid foundation，为…打下坚实基础。
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