2014年高考英语写作误区：不重视逻辑词的使用
江苏高考总分120，作文25分，几乎占据了总分的三分之一，可见其作用是举足轻重的。作文相对于综合度要求高的完型、阅读不一样，多看些文章、积累好词好句并仿写，会有显著提高。但是，同学们正是由于没有注重提高作文的意识或者在写作中有一些不正确的想法，造成作文分数不理想，下面笔者就自己教过的学生出现的写作问题给出具体的解决办法，希望能帮助各位同学提高写作。
误区：不重视逻辑词的使用
有一些学生只是一味地使用逗号，使得整篇文章显得冗长无比。也有的考生在写作时不分段，导致段落过长，甚至一篇文章只有一个段落。这样的文章显得层次不清，让阅卷官难以看出考生对语言的驾驭能力和统领全篇的水平。
对策：一篇好的文章不仅词汇语法高端化，高端化的另一个标志是逻辑词的使用。一篇没有逻辑词的文章就像支离破碎的花瓣，让人没办法看出美感。而有恰当连接词的文章逻辑性强，引着读者继续去看，像一朵玫瑰花一样，好看而实用。写作文有哪些逻辑词?
笔者为大家总结了三类用词：
1.表示方向相反的词和词组：
转折关系：but, yet, however, while, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, otherwise
让步关系：although, though, despite, in spite of
2.表示方向相同的词和词组：
并列关系：and, as well, both…and, as well as, neither…nor, either…or
递进关系：in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, worse still, not only…but also, what’s more/worse/better, to make things worse
因果关系：because of, for, so, as, as a result, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of, therefore
解释关系：for example/instance, that is (to say), in other words, such as, namely
总结关系：in a word, in short, in general, on the whole, to summarize, to conclude, in brief
3.顺序关系词：
时间顺序：at first， to begin with
Second, next, then, later
The next moment, after that, since then, shortly after
At last, in the end, finally, eventually
空间关系：on the right, to the left, on one side of,… on the other side, in the middle/center of…, at the foot/ top/end of
大家来看一篇文章：来自2008年北京卷
Our class intends to do a spring outing. Everyone's opinion differs as for where to spend our spring outing. Some suggested the amusement park while others recommended boating. The rest proposed mountain climbing. After a heated discussion, we reached an agreement: go hiking.
Everyone enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the hillside. However, as we reached the top of the mountain, we found wastes and rubbish were thrown everywhere. We picked up the litters and collected them in plastic bags. We put the sorted trash into the recycling and non-recycling bins.
这篇文章几乎没有用到逻辑连接词，就像支离破碎的花瓣，让人没办法看出美感。这篇文章加上逻辑连接词后如下：
Our class intends to do a spring outing. At the very beginning, everyone's opinion differs as for where to spend our spring outing. Some suggested the amusement park while others recommended boating. Still, the rest proposed mountain climbing. Then, after a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement: go hiking.
At first, everyone enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the hillside. Unfortunately, however, as we reached the top of the mountain, we found wastes and rubbish were thrown everywhere. Without any hesitation, we picked up the litters and collected them in plastic bags. Afterwards, we put the sorted trash into the recycling and non-recycling bins at the foot of the mountain.
第二篇文章加上了表示时间和地点的逻辑词，文章内容显得紧凑，有美感，且文章更加完整。所以写作文时，大家有意识地用上合适的逻辑词，作文质量就会提高很多。
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