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In the past, knowledge was stored in books, but now it is stored in the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?过去知识储藏在书籍里,现在知识保存在网络中。是利是弊?
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解析
本周题目与上周比较接近,写起来并不难,因为它非常贴近我们的日常话题。把知识存储在网络上自有其优势,包括:存放量大,携带、读取都方便,而且更利于知识的传播,但印刷的书籍也有优势,比如不依赖电子设备载体,印刷书的错误更少,更精致,还有读印刷书总给我们一种与作者更直接交流的温暖感觉,等等。
参考范文
Today we all believe that knowledge is just at the tip of our fingers because all knowledge seems to be have been stored electronically and is easilyaccessible on the Internet. There have been mixed responses to this development, and personally I think more and more people will rely on the Internet for knowledge though the printed books will never completely disappear.
(1) 本段引出话题,提出自己下文拟论证的观点:知识上网有很多优势,但印刷书籍也不会消失。请学习唐老师是如何规避“有些人认为......,另外一些人认为.......”这个模板套路的。
(2) At the tip of fingers 近在咫尺;在指尖
(3) Electronically 电子化地
(4) Accessible 可以获取的
(5) Mixed responses 各种不同的反应
Storing knowledge in the Internet has obvious advantages. Owing to itsvirtually unlimited capacity, the Internet can store all knowledge in the world. This makes it quite unnecessary for us to spend that much money constructing thebrick-and-mortar libraries. Then as long as we have Internet connection, we can find whatever we desire to know no matter where we are. So, rather than carrying heavy books on American culture with me, I can sit at a coffee table and with a few simple keyboard clicks, I can have immediate access to any book in the world on that topic. What is more, if I would like to share some important knowledge with my friend, again a few simple clicks would do, but were the knowledge stored in the book form, then I would probably have to find time to go to the post-office and send the book to him/her, which is far more time-consuming and less efficient.
(1)本段分析网络储存知识的好处:首先是节约钱;其次是容易找到;再其次是容易分享。请各位读者认真学习唐老师是不露痕迹地层层推进这三层意思。
(2)Owing to 由于,因为
(3)Virtually (=nearly; actually; almost) 几乎;实际上地
(4)Capacity 容量;空间;能力
(5)Brick-and-mortar 实体的(相对于虚拟的)
(6)Time-consuming 耗时的
(7)Efficient 有效率的
Keeping knowledge in the Internet, however, will make us excessively dependent on electronic devices. Simply put, in case of power-off or computer break-down, we will be thrown into a terribly helpless situation. But this is not a problem for people who learn things from books. Additionally, many people simply prefer reading real books for knowledge to online sources, because they believe books are more reliable and they find themselves emotionally and intellectually more attached to knowledge in books.
(1)本段讲网络存储知识的坏处(让我们过于依赖电子产品)以及书籍的好处。但唐老师此处采用略写的方式,因为主要观点是将网络存储的优势。
(2)Excessively 过分地
(3)Be dependent on... 依赖于......
(4)Prefer ...to... 更喜欢......不喜欢......
(5)Attached 紧密的;依恋的
My conclusion, then, is that knowledge will increasingly find its way to the Internet and it will make knowledge storage more economical and convenient, yet books will never vanish because there are always people who would like toembrace knowledge in printed form.
(1)本段对前文观点进行总结。这里需要高度提炼(但不见得一定总结到前文中的每个点,照顾到最重要的即可)。
(2)Find its way to... 走进......
(3)Economical 节约的
(4)Vanish 消失
(5)Embrace 拥抱
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