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2018年雅思写作范文及思路点拨:应不应该鼓励学生批评老师?

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为大家带来的2015年5月16日雅思写作大作文真题:To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.本题为教育类话题,请查看范文详情:

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文章结构:4段

首段:导入话题,表达立场

主体段1:the positive effects of evaluating and criticizing teachers on the quality of education

主体段2:the negative effects of evaluating and criticizing teachers in the classroom

结尾段:重述要点,表明立场

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Nowadays, whether evaluating and criticizing teachers should be supported in the classroom has become a controversial issue. From my perspective, evaluation and criticism of teachers are necessary for the improvement of education if they are objective and reasonable.

现在,是否应该在课堂上对教师进行评价和批判,已经成为一个有争议的问题。从我的观点来看,如果教育是客观合理的,那么对教师的评价和批评是必要的。

On the one hand, proposing changes to teachers’ lesson content contributes to the improvement of teaching quality. Usually, it is difficult for teachers to realize the mistakes and slips in their teaching unless students remind them. Additionally, teachers may not clearly know what students have known and want to know when planning their lessons. If students can put forward their ideas and suggestions towards the lesson, it will be of great help for teachers to upgrade the teaching projects. Moreover, trying to evaluate teachers’ lesson is particularly beneficial for students’ academic and career development in the future. The modern education emphasizes criticism and innovation. Undoubtedly, it is an effective way for students to debate or discuss with teachers.

一方面,对教师教学内容进行改革,有助于提高教学质量。通常情况下,教师很难意识到这些错误并在教学中疏忽,除非学生们提醒他们。此外,老师可能不清楚学生在计划课程时所知道的和想要知道的内容。如果学生能对课程提出自己的想法和建议,对教师进行教学改革将有很大的帮助。此外,试着评价教师的课程对学生将来的学业和职业发展有很大的帮助。现代教育强调批评和创新。毫无疑问,这是学生与老师辩论或讨论的有效方式。

On the other hand, the disruptive students will probably disturb the class and negatively affect both teaching and learning outcomes. When students voice their opinions in the classroom, it will be hard to maintain the order and discipline and the teachers may feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a loss in terms of knowledge and other learning content. This is because teachers always devote much to delivering knowledge and explaining theories. If they are disrupted, the teaching plan may not be able to be fulfilled. As a result, both teachers and students have to face a loss in the quality of education.

另一方面,破坏性的学生可能会扰乱课堂,对教学和学习成果都产生负面影响。当学生在课堂上表达自己的观点时,很难维持秩序和纪律,而老师们可能会感到不受尊重。此外,学生在知识和其他学习内容方面也会遭受损失。这是因为老师总是在传授知识和解释理论方面投入很多。如果他们被打乱了,教学计划可能无法实现。因此,教师和学生都必须面对教育质量的下降。

To sum up, it can be recommended that students evaluate and criticize teachers in the classroom on the premise that they have decent manners without disturbing the learning atmosphere. Only in this way will teachers and students achieve a win-win outcome in education.

总而言之,我们可以建议学生在课堂上评价和批评老师,前提是他们有礼貌,不会影响学习气氛。只有这样,教师和学生才能在教育上实现双赢。

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