2016专四作文范文:校园学术造假
2016专四作文范文:校园学术造假
2016专四改革已尘埃落定,专四作文取消了原有的小作文(便条),大作文以材料作文为主题,约200词。新东方在线英语专四频道整理了2016专四作文范文供专四考生们参考引用。
Academic Dishonesty on Campus
It is shown in the recent surveys that many college students copy papers from the Internet to save the trouble of doing their assignments . In my opinion, this kind of academic dishonesty is very harmful to these students.
引言部分 :作者先提出有学生从网上抄文章以完成老师布置的任务,然后提出自己的观点:这种行为对学生是不利的。
First, copying papers from the Internet makes students lazy. Copying papers from the Internet seems easy and can save some time and trouble; seldom work hard to complete their papers on their own. In other words, students will become lazier and lazier. Second, students can learn little from copying others’ work. Students cannot improve their abilities just by downloading papers from the Internet without their own thinking and working. What’s worse, once students get used to academic cheating, they may also cheat in other cases in the future, which will be very dangerous for them, especially when it’s put down in the honesty record .
主体部分:作者在这里给出了三个理由:使学生变懒 ;学不到东西,破坏诚信。这里使用 了first,second,what s worse来连接这些理由。这里的一个亮点是近义词的使用,如 :copy papers from the Internet ,academic dishonesty ,copy others work ,download papers from the internet,academic cheating 等都是表示学术舞弊行为。
Therefore, in order to prevent academic dishonesty on campus, some punishments by the school may be necessary. But the most important thing is that teachers should talk to those students, and make them aware of the fact that copying others’ work cannot bring them any knowledge and that only by working hard can they improve themselves.
总结部分:作者用therefore自然引入结论部分,提出自己的建议:需要惩罚,但更要教育。
亮点回放
1.save the trouble of doing sth.:“省去做某事的麻烦”;
2.assignment : “任务,被指定的(课外 )作业” ;此处也可以用homework ,task等 ,但是assignment学术性更强些 ,在这里更恰当。
3.download :“下载”;这是常用的与网络相关的词语 ,常用 的还有upload ,copyand paste ,install ,uninstall等 。
4.inothercases: “在其他情况下” ;也可以用inothersituations ,onotheroccasions,under other circumstances等 。
5. be put down:“记下”;这里还可以用be written down ,be recorded等 。
6.honesty record: “诚信记录” ;也可以用integrity record来代替 。
7. talk to: 通常表示“和某人谈话” ,此处暗含着“教育某人”的意思 。
8.only by working hard can they improve themselves: “只有通过努力他们才能有所提高” 这里使用 的是部分倒装 的句式 。当only,hardly,scarcely,seldom等词放在句首时,通常要部分倒装。
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