盼望的事:在军训的日子里-During the Days of Military.
【内容提示】
军训是同学们企盼已久的事，这一天终于到来了。你们在烈日下每天训练6个小时，脸晒黑了，汗流浃背，但你们感到非常快乐。训练时，排长对你们要求很严。过后对你们非常友好。经过训练你们学到了许多东西。
【作文示范】
During the Days of Military Training
The day we were looking forward to came at last----a week＇s military training began.
During the training, each of us did his (her) part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.
In the blazing① sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldn＇t wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned.② We felt happy and proud of it .
Our platoon③ officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.
The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. We＇ll never forget it.
（选自1987年11月10日《上海学生英文报》）
【词语解释】
①blazing [＇bleiziR] a．强烈的；闪耀的
②tan[t4$n] v．把……晒黑
③platoon[pl ＇tu:n] n．（军队的）排
【写法指要】
文章开门见山地说，军训开始了，这是他们盼望已久的事。接下来总的讲军训的时间和天气条件。然后，作者从两个方面展开：一是以苦为乐，二是干群关系。这些都是中国人民解放军最优秀的传统。最后，作者说他们通过军训学到许多东西，军训给予他们严明的纪律，也使他们感到幸福，永远难忘。全文写得条理清晰，情深意切。
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