The Lottery: More Good Than Harm 六合彩:利多于弊

The Lottery: More Good Than Harm

Have you noticed the large number of stalls scattered near bus stops and shopping centers selling lotteries? Have you watched the rites drawing lottery on TV and read the draw prize winning numbers publicized on newspapers every week? Have you heard of some poor workers earning great wealth by lottery overnight? Admit it or not, lottery has already become a much concerned social issue of wide controversy in our city.

There＇s no denying that lottery may encourage people to indulge in a spectacular dream of gaining great fortune overnight without hard work and thus distract their devotion to routine work. However, an objective analysis shows that lottery does more good than harm, mainly for three specific reasons.

First of all, lottery offers an effective way to collect great amount of funds needed for social construction and welfare of the poor. It provides people with a promising opportunity of getting desirable returns instead of plainly soliciting contributions,which somewhat meet the trait of human nature. Various kinds of lottery, such as sports lottery, welfare lottery, transfer the collected treasury to people and industries that are in urgent demand of money, hence facilitate to realize the optimization of resource allocation.

Secondly, lottery, as a novelty that emerged a few years ago, has turned into a pleasant ingredient in people＇s daily life,bringing us much excitement and surprise. It not only offers a probability of becoming rich out of good luck, but make people＇s fine wishes for future＇s affluence seem a little more reasonable as well, which may serve as a spiritual prop for those impoverished to strive on. Buying lottery is also a way of investment, like the fund operation in the stock market. The increase in value isn＇t necessarily achieved at the cost of physical labor, but mainly depends on an acute grasp of market opportunity and a profitable investment decision. Some branches of learning which claim to study the principles of lottery have also emerged, indicating lottery＇s stepping out of a mere fad into a mature stage and people＇s rational attitude towards it.

Finally, lottery also serves as an invisible bond between different social classes, which confer our materialistic world a little human touch. Statistics from a recent survey indicate that most lottery buyers consider the money their donation to the society if they aren＇t lucky enough to win the prizes. Indeed, lottery prorides us with a simple and concrete way to make a bit contribution to our country and people, as the cost of per share of lottery is considerably low. Lottery is in some way similar to gambling,but at least it＇s for a right purpose.

So as I see it, the advantages of lottery fully outweigh its disadvantages, and it has turned into a significant part in our daily life. Why not try your luck and buy some kind of lottery one day? Maybe you＇ll get a big surprise.

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