范文:Examinations
「要求」
每个学生在其学习生涯中都会经历大大小小无数次的考试。每个人对考试的看法都不相同,有人认为考试是促进学习的手段,而有人则认为考试是一种出题人的主观评价,耗费学生的精力,阻碍他们学习更多的新知识。那么考试到底有什么作用呢?请你从下面三个方面入手以考试为题写一篇文章。
考试通常被认为是促进学生学习的手段。
但不同的人对考试看法不同。
如何利用考试这一手段更好地促进学习。
「范文」
Examinations
Examinations have generally been regarded as a means to stimulate students to make greater efforts to study. However, different people have different ideas about examinations.
Some people believe that examinations can help students go over what they have learnt and find out their weak points in studying. They are almost sure that if examinations were cancelled, most students would not study hard. But others think that examinations are a form of subjective assessment and cannot reflect a student's ability and talent. Usually students spend so many hours preparing for examinations that they have no time lift to learn new knowledge.
Now the most important thing is to reform examinations. The purpose of examinations should be not only to help students review and assess what they have already learnt but also to encourage them to study hard and raise their abilities to analyze and solve problems.
「评语」
本文按照题目所给的三个方面分为三段。首段用一句话简要概括了普遍的观点,而后用“However”一词引出不同的人有不同的看法,为第二段做好了铺垫。第二段叙述了两种具有代表性的看法,条理清晰,逻辑严密。末段谈到了要通过改革使考试能够更有效地达到促进学习的目的。全文三段之间连接自然顺畅,内容切题,行文简洁,表达准确。
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