范文:My Teacher
「要求」
根据下面的提示写作。你的英语老师张小姐是你所遇到的最好的一位老师。她尽职尽责,在学习上严格要求你们,耐心辅导你们的功课;课下是你们的朋友,和你们一起玩,开玩笑。总之,张老师是你的一位良师益友,你为有这样一位老师而感到幸运。
「范文」
My Teacher
My English teacher, Miss Zhang, is the best teacher I have ever had. She not only teaches us very well, but also treats us as if we were her younger brothers and sisters.
She is strict with us in our studies. And with her help, we have made great progress in English. She is patient in her teaching. She is never tired of helping us with our work. Sometimes, she visits us at home to see how we do our homework. And she never scolds us. She only reminds us to be careful and try to correct the mistakes if we make them.
Miss Zhang is also our close friend. After class she often plays and jokes with us.
I feel lucky to have such an excellent teacher and I love her very much.
「评语」
文章充满了对一位优秀老师的敬爱之情,结构严谨,用词精当,感激之情溢于言表,值得品味。
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