范文:Education 2
「要求」
请分别以下面三句话作为各段首的主题句，写一篇题为“教育”的短文。
教育对建设一个富强的国家有着重要作用。
教育的宗旨不是为名图利，而是有着更高远的目标。
要促进中国的教育，需做到以下几点。
「范文」
Education
Education plays a vital role in building a powerful and prosperous country. A country full of illiterates would suffer from poverty and would have no escape from humiliation， as is the case with old China. Modern science and technology are progressing rapidly， and our country is in dire need of gifted persons. Only by developing education of the whole nation can we realize the four modernizations which would otherwise be an empty talk.
College education is much more than dancing or going on a picnic； there are lots of serious things to learn.
The aim of education is not set upon fame and riches； as a matter of fact， if aims at much more important goals. We go to school not for the purpose of gaining a diploma so as to make it easier to get employed and promoted for a bright career. Instead ，we go to school to acquire solid knowledge， to receive sound moral training， and to build up a strong body. Developing morally， intellectually and physically， we prepare ourselves for the future work to be assigned by the country.
Most problems can be lumped into three types： organizational， process， or cultural.
As to how to improve our education， several points should be made. First of all， we should teach people the fact that the development of our country relies on education. We should mobilize the whole nation to run all kinds of schools， to eliminate thoroughly the illiteracy of the country. What is more， actions should be taken to increase the education fund and to raise the teachers' salary and prestige.
「评语」
本篇为三段式的给出主题句作文。第一段的“no escape from”，“in dire need of”以及“Only by……”的倒装句突出了教育的紧迫性和重要性。第二段用了三个不定式排比，后又以“morally”， “intellectually”和“physically”与“sound moral training”，“solid knowledge”和“a strong body”相呼应，措辞讲究，避免了重复。末段从思想上和物质上对改进教育提出了建议，三个“We should”的排比句增强了文章的力度。
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