范文:How to Approach Money
「要求」
题目:How to Approach Money.请根据以下提示作文,要求以三句话作为段首语结构文章。
Money is necessary in our modern life.
But money is not all good.
How should we approach money.
「范文」
How to Approach Money
Money is necessary in our modern life. We need money to buy things such as food and clothing. When we go out, we should pay traffic fee and other fees. In a word, money is important. With more money, we can live better and create better working or studying conditions.
But money is not always good. Many people work hard when they have no money but do nothing when they have more than enough money, And even worse, there are some people nowadays who make money at the expense of friendship or other people's interests.
How should we approach money, then? In my opinion, we should work hard to earn more money, But at the same time, we must remember that money is not our final goal.
一定要把握好“度”哦,不要离topic sentence太远。
「评语」
本文为一给起首句的作文,所以内容限制很大,个人发挥余地较小。本文优点在于简练地评论了金钱的利与弊,逻辑清楚。此类文章写作起来比较容易。
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