大学英语作文模板: 论时间
写作范文：
①As is vividly betrayed in the cartoon, a juvenile, with great efforts, is pushing a clock hand forward，because he is curious about his future. An old man, however, is doing his utmost to push the clock hand backward, because he wants to retrospect his old days. ②Apparently what they do is ultimately futile.
①Simple as the picture is, which subtly conveys is profound and thought-provoking. ②There is little dispute that time is a sovereign gift for all people and no one is expected to manipulate or speed it up. ③So, attempting a life is filled with no regrets, one should employ his time well, otherwise, a humiliating future will be not far away from us. ④In addition, the old saying:“Time and tide wait for no man” also highlights the magnitude of cherishing time. ⑤Therefore, what we are supposed to do everyday is to make use of every chance to do useful things.
①As far as I'm concerned, time invariably treats everyone equally. ②One can become informed and wise by treasuring time. ③Mo Yan, for example, who cherishes every minute to think and contemplate，and he has achieved great success in his works. ④Hence let's keep the aphorism in mind forever, that is: “A young idler,an old beggar”.
原作点评：
第一段描述图画的内容，应注意拼写问题。第二段揭示图画的寓意，深入探讨珍惜时间的重要性；第①句注意时态的正确使用；第②句注意单词拼写及动副结构的使用。第三段通过举名人的例子及格言“少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，点明文章主题。总体点评文章亮点：文章结构完整，每个段落的功能基本得以体现。
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