大学英语四级常见低分作文:5分范文
英语四级作文评分标准:
1. 本题满分为15分
2. 阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。
3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。
4. 评分标准
5. 2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
[注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。]
作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7
下面看一下作文得分5分的范文。
5分
Recent years, a topic of how should parents help children to be independent, which has aroused widely public attention. As far as I am concerned that is right in a sense, which parents do every thing for their children. Because of the children is parents’s all things. However, I am favor of parents should help children to be independent as soon as possible。
How should parents help children to be independent. In my opinion, parents should believe their children first. Parents should be certain with their children can recognize the true or fault and right or wrong of something. Secondly, parents had best to let their children to relize the responsity of himself and the family. In addition, parents also need to connect with their children and know about what children is doing recently。
By doing so, children may make mistake even lost their way and so on. However, don’t worried, parents. Your children must be succeed from their experience。
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