2018 年12月英语四级写作真题第一套解析
【整体解析】
本次四级作文又回到了大学生熟悉的话题，考查大学生省的学习以及生活，现象类作文，而且文体也很清晰，就是一篇传统的议论文，考查形式和内容都类似于2016年12月的真题，总体难度中等。
【试题解析】
具体解析如下：
文章分三段式论述，第一段引出话题，简明扼要的指出背景，第二段分析问题，这里也就是说明挑战的具体内容，第三段提出应对挑战的措施。
范文：
The current days have witnessed the phenomenon that a mounting number of college students are showing great enthusiasm for starting a career after graduation. Despite the seemingly promising prospect in the pursuit of earning money and realizing the value of life, they may also face a variety of challenges.
First and foremost, most students are unwilling to do fundamental jobs because they think fundamental jobs can neither bring them money nor give them benefit. Besides, some companies are too strict to students. They claim that students without practical experience are not suitable for their position. What’s more, China is a country with a large number of population, which leads to stiff competition among students.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, graduates should improve their capacity as well adjust their vision to find new chances in the job market. Dreadful as the challenges are, it is deeply-rooted in my mind that as long as graduates can arm themselves with power and determination, the ideal jobs are awaiting them.
本文以卷三the challenges of starting a career after graduation为例，第一段介绍了在当今社会越来越多的学生选择毕业之后工作，然而他们也面临着一些挑战，第二段从三个方面分析挑战的内容，一方面是学生自己的问题，第二个是用人单位要求严格，以及第三个形势严峻，最后第三段指出在面临这些挑战时，学生应如何应对，是一篇典型的问题解决型文章的写法，中规中矩就基本完美了。
基本结构确立后，就是语言的雕琢，首先是一些高频词的替换，例如bad, future等。其次是句型结构的多变，熟练的词性转换、适当的倒装从句的灵活运用，都可以使得句式变化多样，而且长短句结合，也使文章看起来丰富多彩，更加具有层次性。最后是句与句、段与段之间的关联，关联词和过渡句都是必不可少的，连接词使观点清晰，过渡句也起到了每段的主题句的作用，使文章更加富有层次感。
借此机会，再次提醒各位同学，尽管近几年大学英语四级写作专项看起来变化莫测，但万变不离其宗，大家要学会透过现象看本质，确立文章结构，把握好大方向，同时夯实词句段基本功的训练，以不变应万变，决胜四级写作。
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