高考英语优秀作文赏析：2008年天津卷2
How to Protect Our Eyesight
Look at the picture and you will find the worrying phenomenon: most students now wear glasses. Because of unhealthy ways of using eyes and high study pressure, students get shortsighted easily.
However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting shortsighted. When reading, make sure you are in the bright place and let your eyes rest every hour. If your eyes are aching,doing some eye exercises can relieve your eye tiredness. It will be good to your eyes to take enough sleep. I believe you can protect your eyes if you follow the tips.
Hope every one of you have a clear world!
名师点评：
本文审题准确，要点完整而齐全。从结构来说，首先提出问题，其次讨论如何及为什么需要解决问题。文章长短句结合使用，句式变换而流畅。文章用词地道而成熟，可以称得上是一篇不错的考场佳作。
积累卡片：
好词：1. ache v. 疼痛2. pressure n. 压力3. relieve v.缓解
好句：1. However, we can do something to protect our eyes from getting shortsighted. 然而我们可以采取一些措施来保护我们的眼睛免于近视。好处：do something to，采取措施。
2. If your eyes are aching, doing some eye exercise can relieve your eye tiredness. 如果你的眼睛感到疼痛，做眼操可以缓解你的视力疲劳。好处：动名词作主语引导从句。
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