2010年3月6日雅思写作G类书信范文及点评
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You would like to work overseas, write a letter to a job agent company, tell it:
a) what job you would like to apply to
b) what companies are you looking for
c) why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
专家点评：
本次书信考察内容为申请信，申请的内容为工作。对于多数已经有工作经验的G类考生来说比较简单。
在回答题目的过程中，考生需注意以下三点：
1. 一定要将题目中所问的问题回答完整；
2. 编撰的细节要显得真实；
3. 由于是申请信，因此在用词方面需要比较正式且有礼貌；
本次所选范文已经完成了以上三点要求，在语汇使用上面也比较符合书信的要求，不失为一篇好的申请信类的范文。
本文标题：2010年3月6日雅思写作G类书信范文及点评 - 雅思作文_雅思写作_雅思范文a) what job you would like to apply to
b) what companies are you looking for
c) why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
专家点评：
本次书信考察内容为申请信，申请的内容为工作。对于多数已经有工作经验的G类考生来说比较简单。
在回答题目的过程中，考生需注意以下三点：
1. 一定要将题目中所问的问题回答完整；
2. 编撰的细节要显得真实；
3. 由于是申请信，因此在用词方面需要比较正式且有礼貌；
本次所选范文已经完成了以上三点要求，在语汇使用上面也比较符合书信的要求，不失为一篇好的申请信类的范文。
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