【雅思写作妙招】案例讲解如何让雅思作文多样化
在雅思考试中,大多数中国学生最担心的就是写作了,很多同学在写作上投入精力最多,耗时最长,但收效甚微,其实这往往和学生备考方式不当有一定的关心。雅思作文栏目雅思考试高分学员alina分享了她的雅思作文心得。她认为,一篇好文章的条件很多,除了内容丰富外,同一件事,用不同的表达,其结果也是不同。
如果在雅思作文中清一色的使用简单句、长句,那文章必定会比较乏味。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。下面分析这五种表达,虽然是一个意思,但是句式不同,重点也会有些差别。
1.The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter.
2.Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter.
3.In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter.
4.There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter.
5.As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter.
其中,第一种和第五种句式最为常见,如果在这种基础上,再用其它三种互相替换,效果不是更好吗?
下面是我总结的一些常用形容词,在文章中也可以适当的进行一些形容词的变化:
贫穷的:poor=needy=impoverished=poverty-stricken
积极的,好的:good=conducive=beneficial=advantageous
消极的,不良的:bad=detrimental=baneful=undesirable
明显的:obvious=apparent=evident=manifest
健康的:healthy=robust=sound=wholesome
惊人的:surprising=amazing=extraordinary=miraculous
美丽的:beautiful=attractive=gorgeous=eye-catching
有活力的:energetic=dynamic=vigorous=animated
引起:cause=trigger=endanger
解决:solve=resolve=address=tackle=cope with=deal with
拆除:destroy=tear down=knock down=eradicate
培养:develop=cultivate=foster=nurture
激发,鼓励:encourage=motivate=stimulate=spur
完成:complete=fulfill=accomplish=achieve
保留:keep=preserve=retain=hold
有害于:destroy=impair=undermine=jeopardize
减轻:ease=alleviate=relieve=lighten
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