2017年5月13日雅思G类写作考试小作文真题范文:求助信
You are required to give a presentation for the company and will use a kind of equipment you are not familiar with. Write a letter and ask one of your colleges for help
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Write a letter to your college. In your letter:
Write when and where the presentation will be
Give details how you will use the equipment
Be specific how he or she can help
解析:
这是一封给同事的求助信,可以确定这是一封非正式的信件,称谓、文后落款、信件语气都较为轻松随意。
题目列出了三个问题,注意每个问题的关键词:presentation的时间和地点,关于如何使用设备的细节,同事可以如何帮助的细节。读题的时候记得划关键词,如果漏掉某个信息,TA会扣分。
参考范文:
Dear John,
I am writing to ask for your help about how to use the projector in Room 202.(开头I am writing to……直接介绍写信目的)
As I have mentioned above,the presentation will be given on next Friday morning in Room 202 since it is the only room that can hold/seat(容纳) all the staff. (回答题目问题,并适当补充细节,使文章看起来生动合理)This is where I get trapped---I have no idea about how to use the projector(引入下一个问题,过渡自然)
I have prepared two charts,one for the sales volume in last month and another for this month. To better illustrate the data involved,I have to project these two charts onto the same screen and then skip to the next page where the detailed comparison is listed.
Therefore(承接上面的问题描述,提出需要的帮助),I would appreciate it if you can tell me how to project my pictures clearly and how to switch back and forth between pages swiftly. Besides,I would like to know how to adjust my speech to better suit my audience since you are quite good at giving presentation.(可以提出额外的要求,让信件更加生动)
I do hope you will be able to send me a favorable reply and your warmhearted help will be greatly appreciated . (文末提出感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Mary
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