雅思写作9分范文解读 一手拿下流程图
各位烤鸭们，又到了我们的高分范文解读时刻。这次要和大家分享的是雅思小作文中的流程图。流程图是许多考生的噩梦，并且已在今年的考试中出现了两次关于咸鱼制作的该类图。那么，就让我们一起来学习一下如何拿下流程图吧。
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这篇例文是曼城前考官Simon的作品，总共分为4段：
第一段：在改写题目之余，作者又加入了对该流程图的概述
第二段：通过连接词和表达的使用，改写了图标中的第1、2、3步骤(废纸的收集、分类和运输)。
第三段：归纳了第4、5步骤：废纸的清洁和去墨。
第四段：涵盖了最后一步骤，指出该流程图最后产出的是可再利用的纸张。
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The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.
At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.
Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out.Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage.
Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper-making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.
可以看出，想要得到高分，除了有词汇的多样性，还得使用足够多的连接词来表明每一个步骤。其次，可以发现对于没有具体时间点的图标，该篇文章还采用了一般现在时。最后，作为一幅工序制作图，被动语态自然是少不了的。各位同学学会了吗?祝大家早日与雅思分手～
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