2018英语专四作文常见四类错误总结
2018英语专四作文常见四类错误总结
一,一个简单句出现多个谓语
1. There are two pictures show something.
There be 句型中谓语动词就是be 动词,如果需要出现其他动词,建议用非谓语动词,to do ,或者doing, to do 表达目的,以及未发生的动作,doing,表达正在发生或者伴随的动作。
所以此句正确写法为, There are two pictures show ing something.
2. Parents want most is our care and company.
同理,此句,出现了两个谓语动词,want 和is ,多谓语,除了可以删除一个动词,改成简单句,也可以加连词,变成一个从句,此句,也可以有两种改法。
第一种,want 变成wanting ,doing结构做主语,people 则是wanting 的逻辑主语, 所以,此句可以改成非常高大上的,独立主格。
Parents wanting most is our care and company.
也可以改成,主语从句
What Parents want most is our care and company.
二,错误搭配
We should be grateful our parent……
对……感恩,句子表达应该为,be grateful to sb for sth
所以,此句正常表达是We should be grateful to our parent……
三,词性混淆
Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because work or something.
在词句子中,because 为连词,连词需要连接句子,而此句子中,because 之后只有名词, 所以,此处应该改为,because of, 此外根据句意,something 后面应该接一个else.
此句正确表达是,Young people can`t always keep their parents company, because of work or something else.
四,无主句
1.As is vividly depicted in the photo that four persons are playing a football game.
此句子中,as,为连词,that也是连词,所以as 和 that之后均为从句,那此句的问题正是,全都是主句,无从句。建议删掉一个连词,保留一个作为主句。
此句正确表达是:As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are playing a football game.
2.The development of Chinese economy, which has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.
此句中,主句只剩 the development of Chinese economy, 无谓语,which 之后全是从句,所以词句,需要把which 删掉,让has offered 作谓语。
正确表达The development of Chinese economy has offered aboundant time and money to visit museums.
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