详解托福独立写作的3个开头模板
在托福的写作过程中,良好的开头段能让评审官眼前一亮,为之后的评分打下良好的基础。但是,怎样才能是良好的开头呢?ETS官方发布的托福独立写作满分标准第一条中就明确指出:“满分文章必须有效地针对给定话题进行论述(effectively addresses the topic and task)”。也就是说,在西方人眼里,明确的观点,树立清晰的思想主题才是最为重要的。
因此常见的开头方式有以下两种:一是开门见山型,即开头段只有1-2句话,清晰、简练地针对给定话题表达观点和态度;二是背景概述型,即开头段中先用1-2句话的篇幅结合给定话题提出背景,对其成因、现象或日常观察等进行描述,再亮明观点。 下面就为大家带几个不同级别的托福写作模板,大家不妨来尝试套用一下吧。
A.(good)一般性的
With the development/introduction…, xxx, the xxx, are more and more +adj/ become adj increasingly. Xxx often face the dilemma of whether to vt …… with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……/ I think to vt what would be a better choice.
B.(better)比较有逻辑的,有支持性的
In daily life /during our life, so many problems are worth considering carefully. As what has been come up with, when you face/when it comes to /there is a public debate today that/recently the problem has been brought into focus that… ……what is your choice and what is your opinion? Some hold the view that/some think………..while the others believe that………. However, with all aspects carefully considered, I believe that……………
零碎的句子:A is a common way of ….., but is it a wise one? Some people hold the different view……
C. (excellent) 如果发现可以用到反问排比就这样套句,前提是你的例子足够多,头脑风暴用的又好又快。
Have you ever been to ……/have you ever + 过去分词/received/faced/experienced……
If you had never had these experiences, you would never know/ feel/ learn/ realize/ understand……+how much fun/interesting/significant……xxx could bring you.
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