托福独立写作“套路”破解：让步转折
独立写作有点麻烦，因为我觉得这个部分拿good不难，但是你要拿满分的good就难了，独立写作毕竟还是要考一点水平的，所以这部分满分的good我个人认为没有综合部分容易，但是如果你只想拿个good还是很easy的。其实到后面我基本已经形成了一个写作思路，这个思路就是让步转折。
结构就是这样的：
第一段+让步段+两个转折段+结尾，基本就是A比B好，B有一个好处，可是A有两个好处，A的好处点更多，或是A的好处更重大，所以A好，然后总结一下。
一般都希望大家事先准备好自己的一套模板，这里的模板我只局限在开头和结尾，就好比我到后面基本每次都是同样的开头和结尾，考试的时候自己稍微改动几个词就好了，独立写作部分一开始，我就开始写，差不多3分钟时间就把开头和结尾全敲完了，然后我就有更多的时间写我的中间段了。宗旨就是最好自己写，自己改，可以多看看范文之类的，自己总结一套，之后你就按那个写，背熟它，考试的时候3分钟潇潇洒洒噼里啪啦就将近100个词敲上去了，想想都爽。
这是我用的开头段，因为我后面都用让步转折，所以就用了这个开头。
In contemporary society, much ink has been spilled about......(题目改写),and some claim that... Such assertion, however, is torn to pieces by others. As far as I am concerned, the statement that...(题目改写)is arbitrary and one-sided because it fails to take all the related circumstances into consideration. We should analyze this statement comprehensively before we draw the eventual conclusion.结尾段In brief, based on the previous discussion, the issue...(改写题目)is complex and needs a case by case analysis. We are not supposed to disregard those situations where the statement is unjustifiable. As a result, I cannot totally agree with this statement.
之后就是中间段落怎么写了，这里我推荐大家多看看考题，将其分分类，想一想一般都有什么理由可以写，像压力、经济等理由是很适用的，你平时多练练考试的时候直接套上去就行了。这里给大家看几个例子：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题型：隐藏绝对词类
话题：社会类
分析：隐藏绝对词类的题目暗含的意思是一类人都应该做某事儿。
我们既可以完全同意这个事儿的2-3个好处，也可以完全不同意找到其2-3个比较好展开而且不重复的坏处，毕竟一个事儿很难适合所有人，只要我们找到一个反例，实际上就可以很好地反驳这个题目。
思路一：一边倒同意
1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度，现在的年轻人普遍面临着双重压力，因此没有时间和精力来帮忙社区。
First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer...
2.随着社交网络的出现以及生活节奏的加快，现在的年轻人跟邻居熟识的机会越来越少，自然也就不愿意去参与社区的改善。
On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.Money is the most important aspect in a job.Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.Helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.
思路二：具体情况具体分析
对于条件比较差的年轻人来说，他们很难找到足够的时间来帮助改善社区因为他们没有选择只能不遗余力的赚更多的钱，甚至以牺牲自己的身体健康为代价。
With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.
然而，对于那些来自经济比较发达地区的年轻人来说，很容易想象他们中绝大部分人愿意在社区改善中扮演非常积极的角色。首先，他们更强烈的意识到和谐社区的必要性;其次，不断提高的生活水平使得他们不必成为最基础的需求担心，主要问题或许集中在通过改善社区获得新的成就感。
However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities. It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.
To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children education than on higher education?
题型：二元素对比类
话题：教育类
分析：从涉及到主题出发，比如老师、学生、家长、国家的角度进行讨论
Today people cannot buy products based on information in their advertisements because advertisements are less honest than before.
题型： 今昔对比类
话题： 商业类
思路： 一边倒，但是从公司和个人两个角度进行分析
First of all, there is no denying that fewer and fewer companies would like to allure their customers through deceptive ads since the benefits of such kind of market activities pales into insignificance when set against their huge negative impact.Furthermore, at the individual level, with the advent of popularity of the internet, especially the introduction of all kinds of applications, an increasing number of consumers have come to the rude awakening that most of ads are at best informative and at worst misleading.
这里列出的都是body part最开头的几句，这里很多给出的理由和解题思路都给你列出来了，试着按他提供的这种自我分析一下。这里面其实有些句型和短语词组是考场上很高频地会用到的，你不妨就直接拿来背，不断地套这些句型去写不同主题的句子。因为我现在觉得水平不是很高的人如何在托福写作拿高分?不是真的考场上写出来的，是靠考场下准备出来的，是背出来的。像一些你平时觉得考试会经常用到的短语何不平时多总结多练习呢，考场上用到就直接蹦出来了，还会纠结怎么写比较好吗?就好比“许多”、“因为”这种的，你肯定会用，那就平日多总结。
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