范文:For a better understaning between Panernts and Children
「要求」
你和你的父母之间有代沟吗?你认为代沟存在的原因是什么?应该如何解决这个问题呢?请写一篇短文。
「范文」
FOR A BETTER UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PARENTS AND CHILDREN
Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can't approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.
The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future , earn and spend their own money ,and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don't quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school . Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents' tendency to interfere in children's daily activities. In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.
「评语」
本文基本是按照提出问题──分析问题──解决问题的顺序构思:先描写现象,再分析原因,最后找出解决的对策。这样行文符合一般的思维逻辑,在分析原因时注意从双方找原因,而且以对比的形式表现出来,给人的印象鲜明,说理透彻。为什么不把这篇短文译成中文念给你的父母听呢?
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