范文:Problems of wasting
「要求」
人类每时每刻都在浪费着各种各样的资源,不仅包括自然资源,还包括时间资源。请你以下面三句话分别作为段首主题句,写一篇短文谈谈浪费问题。
Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day.
The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time.
It is time to call for an end to waste.
「范文」
Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day. Wherever we turn, we can see that paper, bottles and cans are thrown away; food is wasted just because of its poor taste; clothes are discarded simply due to their old fashion. Not only things and money are wasted, but natural resources are abused as well. Trees are cut down merely for fuel; wildlife is killed simply for food; oil, coal and minerals are exploited in a bad way.
The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time. Many people tend to spend their time on worthless things, such as wandering about in the street, gossiping in the office, or sleeping too much during the day. As we know, time is so precious to us that it passes by and never returns. The waste of time amounts to the waste of life.
It is time to call for an end to waste. On the one hand, we must save natural resources and make full use of them; otherwise human beings will be faced with the scarcity of natural resources and suffer from the pollution caused by wastes. On the other hand, we must treasure our time. Only with our time devoted to study and work for the people will we never regret the life we have had.
「评语」
该文主题突出,论述充分而有层次。句子之间衔接自然,逻辑性强。文中词语搭配讲究,符合英语表态习惯。
词语搭配是难点也是重点,只要熟练运用,才能真正掌握。
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