范文:How to Spend the Summer Vacation
「要求」
题目:暑假两个月的漫长假期为紧张学习的同学们提供了空闲娱乐、实践锻炼的好机会。你将怎样安排你的暑假生活?请以“How to Spend the Summer Vacation”为题,写一篇100个单词左右的英语短文。
写出你安排暑假的活动和选择这些活动的理由。
「范文」
How to Spend the Summer Vacation
In school, we have summer vacation. In summer, the weather is so hot that our brain needs a rest after a period of hard work. Thus it is for health reasons that we have our summer vacation.
What would be the most healthy way to spend it then? There are many kinds of sports, which are good for health in summer, such as swimming, tennis and baseball. But care should be taken not to practice such sports all day long, which would be very bad for our health.
Another point we have to consider is that our time should not be spent entirely in playing. We attend school in order to get some knowledge, which will be useful in our life. But knowledge can only be obtained through constant drilling. During the vacation, we should not neglect to review the lessons we have learnt. It is true that all work and no play makes you a dull fellow. Though there may be other ways to spend the summer vacation, this seems to me the best of all.
「评语」文章首先从暑假的必要性开始,在第二段里又用问句来承上启下,提出本文的中心意思:“我们怎么才能最好地利用暑假的时间呢?”并说明运动是一个很好的选择,但是,第三段又说明还要学习以增长知识。
回答“怎么样”的时候往往要阐述“为什么”,才显得理直气壮。
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