范文:Failure
「要求」
题目：Failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力（efforts）付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。
「范文」
Failure
Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed. Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.
But failure can also benefit us. It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced. Also， we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. So when we start again， we can succeed more easily.
Therefore， failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail， we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience. Then， we may succeed in the future.
Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats――claim them all as victories！
「评语」
本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。
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