托福写作五大错误开头，请避而远之

常言道“万事开头难”，对于托福写作来说，一个简约不简单的开头可以让考官眼前一亮，反之则可能从一开始就给考官留下写作水平不佳的坏印象。那么在托福写作中有那些容易引起低分的错误打开方式呢？下面五个错误的托福写作开头模式，请一定记得避而远之。

错误开头一：中式英文人见人晕

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Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem。 For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there。

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world。 For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage。 I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”。

错误开头二：废话连篇不知所云

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Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting。 I’m very interested in talking about this topic。 Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

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In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok， this topic is a very good topic。 First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much。 Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games。 So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh， this topic is surely very important。 Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

错误开头三：语法错误惨不忍睹

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Topic-If children behave badly， should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

About this problem， my think is if children behave badly， then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parent’s responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

错误开头四：观点模糊态度暧昧

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Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say。 Because I am still very little， only 17， and not married， so this topic is very difficult for me……

错误开头五：偏离主题无轨电车

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Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education。 To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I think to success， we must have a lot of important qualities。 To have these important qualities， we must learn a lot of things， for example， English， music tools， and etc。 We can learn these qualities from our teachers， our friends and from books。 All in all， we can learn from many places。

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