BEC商务英语高级范文(一)
BEC高级的写作分为"图表描述"和"报告撰写"两部分。前者对中国考生来说可能是完全陌生的,涉及对数据表、饼图、柱形图、曲线图等各种图表的描述,字数要求100字以上,时间20分钟。后者 报告撰写部分,则体现了BEC考试重实用的指导思想。题目往往就一句话,没有任何提示项,需要考生在40分钟时间内组织答案和文章。
Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)
Reassessment of job satisfaction: SuePearson(PR Dept.)
Introduction
This report sets out to use Workset colours toassess the accuracy of my job description as PRofficer and to suggest a number of changes.
Findings
It is clear that there is a difference between theway the company views the job and the reality as Iperceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time arenot mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most causefor concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which Ican contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to theunscheduled time I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel these activities are hamperingmy core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meetthe goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.
Conclusions
The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.
Recommendations
I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours.It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart andto investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suitedto these tasks.
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