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5月19日雅思考试写作大作文范文--女性可以参军吗?

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关于女人是否可以参军?如果我们写第一种观点,我们就必须要列举2-3条女人不可参军的理由(比如,身体原因,心理原因,社会原因等);如果我们写第二种观点,也要列举2-3条女人可以参军的理由(比如男女平等;现代化军队女人完全可以应对,甚至有优势等);如果我们写第三种观点,我们就要分析在军队里,女人适合做哪些工作,而另外的工作,则需要男人去做等等。

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Task:

In many countries women are able to join the armed forces on the equal basis as men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and air force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

很多国家,女人能够加入武装部队。然而,一些人认为只有男人应该成为陆军,海军和空军的一员,多大程度上你同意或不同意?

Sample answer:

Just 100 years ago, women serving in the armed forces was basically unheard of, yet now in many countries, women are able to join the armed forces as easily as men. Not afraid of the accusation of being prejudiced or even male chauvinistic, I strongly believe that men and only men should be members of the army, navy and air forces.

In the first place, being a soldier is extremely demanding physically. With very few exceptions, women are not possibly able to withstand the long hours of military exercises and drills. For example, soldiers are sometimes required to remain exposed to the strong sunlight or the heavy storms hours after hours, or to walk many miles with heavy things carried with them. This means a soldier must possess great strength, stamina and endurance. While I am not willing to say that all women are lacking in these qualities, I am pretty sure that most women are not physically fit to become a soldier. In addition, joining the army, navy or air forces means you have to injure or even kill people. This is emotionally unacceptable to most women because they the ones who do not like that much blood shedding.

Furthermore, if a woman plans to join the armed forces, she will have to tackle a number of other social issues. For instance, her parents may have strong objections to this choice of hers, because with a daughter in the army, they may be met with inquiring and doubtful eye from their neighbors and friends. It was for this reason that my cousin sister had to give up her dream of becoming a soldier. Even if a woman does become an army member, she will have to learn to face a world full of the opposite sex. She may feel completely at odds with the rules and disciplines which are designed predominantly for men.

To conclude, physically, emotionally and socially speaking, women are not supposed to serve in the armed forces. However, this does not mean that women do not have their share of responsibility to protect their country. As an advocate of "labor distribution" theory, I think women can help the men soldiers by taking care of their parents, children and the family and this is as important as being soldiers themselves.

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